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Guitar Strums

guitar strings strum

one

one

one

and it feels like with every note

I'm taking a step up

like I'm walking up a stair case

and there's no walls around me

just the wonder in my head

and my heart is waiting; pounding

guitar strings strum

one

one

one

and there's a vibration change

and the rhythm shakes me high

and the thought of dying melts

and the feel of crying flies

the only sensation I could feel 

is the love of you an I


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  1. Date: 4/1/2011 11:10:00 AM

    Smile ~ "Goodmorning My Dear 'Gifted & Beautiful Jessica Arteaga!!!'" ~ After reading this very dream like lovely poe I thought "Yes, How 'Beautiful Is Love' &, 'Your Beauty,' Paints It Perfectly." ~ I love the depth which is Always found amid "Your Treasures" splendid creations; no matter what the topic and or scenario tis brushed in brilliance, intrigue and splendour ~ "Just Like 'You.'" ~ "My Love to 'You Always,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 3/20/2011 10:06:00 AM

    onomatopoeia~ awesome. I so enjoyed the sound thru your well-chosen words. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/14/2011 9:33:00 AM

    so GOOD, a sensory flight of fancy, Burn Baby Burn was like that for me all I wanted was for the reader to feel the HEAT, the bloom the growth of spring a rise of sensation like the notes of a slip jig. Thanks! I enjoyed your verse! Light & Love