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The Concealed Anguish

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The Concealed Anguish

Take my letter to her, O Messenger!
Yes, totally washed are its words and phrases 
A deed of my flooding eyes I couldn’t deter
The tornado of tears accumulated for ages

The storm of anguish concealed in heart
Washed all urges of soul that flowed from pen
The torrents rumbling from the start 
Once started couldn’t be stopped there and then

Her perception will be triggered, I am sure
This blank sheet will reveal all that I meant to say 
The power of love will her instincts conjure
My feelings, my urges won’t go astray

Tell her, that the lustrous mansion of pride and ego
Is falling to pieces like the house of cards
The dark alleys of life that lost their glow
In a state of disrepair, description beyond words

The King of Diamond has lost the game 
A player is lucky to hold the three A’s
Lost is all the glory and fame
Built in years and lost in days
 
His eyes craving for your enchanting face
The candles of his eyes weep in the desolate nights 
Lost is all peace and tranquility’s trace
Your charming features his heart ignites

A few breaths are left in the dying tree of life
With fallen leaves and barren branches entwined
Resuscitate and free it from torments and strife
Be a glow of the dimmed eyes that brilliantly shined

Tell her, the writer awaits your reply 
With burning heart and soul alight
Before torments enhance and wounds multiply 
And the bird of life takes to wing of flight




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  1. Date: 12/30/2011 10:48:00 AM
    I found this poem so very profound with feelings and loss... yet so beautiful in the words expressed. You truly have a great talent.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 12/30/2011 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your heartwarming comments. You are very generous. God Bless You. Happy New Year. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 10/24/2011 3:09:00 PM
    Well, you were certainly on a roll! You have about 3 poems here, really. At least one of them is a sonnet, makes my teachers heart chomp at the bit to help you disect this into 3 fine writes. [Thank you for your kind comment on my verse and yes I am a warrior..soft smile but usally only for others ..I have the white knight archeotype but I'm a lady!] light & love

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/24/2011 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your compliments Debbie. You are very kind. I would like to act on your suggestion. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:13:00 AM
    A complicated verse with all the right words to take the mind on a great adventure. Love this intriguing piece!

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 10/24/2011 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your kind words Elizabeth. You have made my day. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 9/12/2011 11:47:00 AM
    A wonderful poem uncle. Especially the ending, I just loved it.

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 9/12/2011 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliments, Husain. You have made my day. Best wishes
  1. Date: 9/11/2011 3:33:00 PM
    What an extra-ordinary piece of poetry! Breath-taking.Hope everything is well back at your end my dear uncle. Thanks for

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 9/12/2011 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Taha for your generous praise. I am glad you liked my work. A poetry that mesmerizes readers must come from the depth of heart. The journey from the heart's depth to the tip of pen is very tedious and difficult to handle. Thanks once again
    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 9/12/2011 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Taha for your generous praise. I am glad you liked my work. A poetry that mesmerizes readers must come from the depth of heart. The journey from the heart's depth to the tip of pen is very tedious and difficult to handle. Thanks once again
  1. Date: 5/25/2011 11:45:00 AM
    Breathtaking, Mohammad. Really enjoyed the metaphorical use of the "house of cards." If you added a specific card to this write, it would make a terrific entry for Paula's contest. Hope you'll consider entering it. I'm adding you to my favorite poets list. Thanks so much for your kind words -- they mean a lot! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 3:21:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your great expressive and descriptive work...I am glad that I chose this one as one that I read today.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I have posted a new blog..Sara

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 11:08:00 AM
    I am stopping by today to say a special Thank You for your kind comments Mohammad. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2011 6:24:00 AM
    After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Mohammad. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol