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Lost Culture

The island
	Once naive 
now tainted 
by the winds of change
	Once native
now giving birth 
to a race of diverse cultures
	Once a peaceful place
now disturbed
by a rapid modern world
The island
	Once their home
our home
my home
has become an uncertain place in the heart

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  1. Date: 3/17/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Thank You, Patti, what a wonderful poem.

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    U r welcome
  1. Date: 3/15/2011 4:08:00 PM

    very well put about your home. welcome to poetry soup.

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the kind words:)
  1. Date: 3/14/2011 7:10:00 AM

    Very true and insightful work

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/14/2011 4:18:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patti. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/13/2011 3:08:00 PM

    welcome to poetry soup,very nice creative work

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/13/2011 5:52:00 AM

    Creative and thoughtful write on Lost Culture, Patti

    Pedrus Avatar Patti Pedrus Date: 11/8/2011 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you:)