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boundless cruel rage
skips a page lost
from sage advice

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  1. Date: 3/11/2011 3:32:00 PM
    Than-Bauk is a new form for me. Will give it a try one day soon. Interesting. Yes, cruel rage makes the victims of the villain and victim. Profound write, Gentle Fury. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 7:56:00 AM
    I'll bet the lost page had advice explaining how pointless anger can be, Stephen. You write so well in this form. Like Jessica, I will have to look it up and learn more about it because it allows you to convey feelings sharply in just a few lines. Awesome write, my friend, and thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 4:26:00 AM
    Beautifully defined rage, Stephen

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 9:18:00 PM
    boundless cruel rage ( super angery o.0) i like the second line a lot, this is a cool got read up the form though gotta try it, enjoyed reading.