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Last Promise

I left you with one
promise hanging on my tongue.
So tell me my love,

do the words still haunt
you? I can hear your heart call
my name across hell.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2011 9:42:00 AM

    Pure angst beautifully expressed

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 3:08:00 PM

    Breakups are always hard, Madison, especially when we thought we had a future with someone. There is a heart on the other side of hell calling my name too. Eloquently written! Love, Carolyn