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an early spring's afternoon

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an early spring's afternoon

snowflakes float through light
bright gem flashes through iced windows
melting warm inside
consumed by tantric desire
as more than crackling fire burns

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 8:08:00 PM
    I have a burning desire to be next to that crackling fire with a glass of wine and a warm-hearted companion. What a lovely tanka, Stephen! I hope it's warming up in your area now. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 4:51:00 PM
    This could be a reply to a lover's haiku, why not whip up a haiku to either respond to this or to come before it and enter my contest Love Talks. Light & love

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 12:01:00 PM
    Stephen, definitely more than fire hey, lovely Tanka, enjoyed this evening