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Melancholy Faun

Wooden paths I seek forlorn,
I miss the smell where I was born.
The coolest air of blossoms bloom 
no longer wait for me to loom.
No canopy to be my roof ~
now ashes scattered under hoof.
I had to leave I couldn't stay,
they took upon themselves that day:
destroying what I miss the most ~
My home,
 now just a charcoal ghost.

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  1. Date: 3/7/2011 9:53:00 AM

    This is beautifully written. Nice job :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 9:41:00 AM

    I can really relate to the feelings in this. great job!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 9:09:00 AM

    Congrats on becoming only the second poem I've added to "Fav." Loved it. ~Prince.