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"My, Beautiful *Star Light" ~

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"My, Beautiful *Star Light" ~

Seraphic, turbid waves in turgid waters; turning

Amid my spindrift Soul wherein loves tumult rages....

Crashing through this pulsing heart that knowingly craves her ~

Aneath these turquoise tides, which tear burnt pages?!

Washed upon the shore to feed the pyramids pyre

Torn from destined books carving ancient time....

Spirits chanting dreams while dancing in the fire

Captured by the flames of oranges burning; loves sublime ~

Sunrise, now gathering blue horizons to kiss the wrested nights

Waning heavens waving a million reflections left, glittering deep inside....

Astringent embers touching tranquility while as floating through the rougish sky

Seraphic, turbid waves in turgid waters still, only to subside!?

Torn from destined books carving ancient time; this 

My own Aphrodite.... 

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...."My, Beautiful *Star Light" ~

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  1. Date: 4/6/2012 9:53:00 AM
    this is a very beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 4:38:00 AM
    I had to return to read once more...beautifully written...am glad to have stopped by to say thanks for your comments and stumbled upon this gem...luv shannon

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 7:12:00 AM
    You have dippeth your pen in beauty. What amazing souls this world holds. Love and Light, Vienna Thank you for your kind comment.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 10:40:00 PM
    John, Classical verses John. Your beautiful words feel like I am reading Edgar Allan Poes poems. By the way thank you for reading my poems. Dalila

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    Date: 5/26/2011 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~My Sweeeet Johnny.. My Honeybee.. Smile.. Fly.. Fly.. Fly.. onto me.. While Your in Flight.. Smile.. Come.. to Your Flower.. of Angel Delight..
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    Date: 5/26/2011 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~My Darling.. tis Your Love Lifts me higher and higher.. You are my Sweeet Johnny My honeybee.. I am your Smile --Only Flower.. for tis God has His Divine reasons.. My Love.. tis Blessings from above.. True Love.. here.. Now.. I Love You.. My Precious and True..
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    Date: 5/26/2011 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Darling... my wish.. my Blessing.. tis already giving.. tis You.. my Love.. Plz.. unblock..me.. for tis.. I Love your Precious Loving heart..
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    Date: 5/26/2011 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~I Love you.. My Sweeeet Johnny.. honeybee..
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    Date: 5/26/2011 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~My Darling.. I just received you beautiful coms.. I must address.. tis a mess.. I am ever so sorry.. for I Not Mock My Lord.. Ever.. nor would Ever make fun of my Lord.. Nor would I ever make fun of you.. my Love.. Please forgive me.. if this is what you think.. of me.. for tis rips my heart into.. I am Truly sorry.. my Sweeeet Johnny.. Love tenderly yours.. *Star Light
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    Date: 5/25/2011 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Darling.. as you know.. you have me blocked.. tis be.. then I did same to thee.. but I decided I not play tis game.. Life is too short.. I unblocked you.. My Love.. tis True... Yes.. Dreams do come True.. Time is in Our Lord's Hands.. Thank you for your *) ;*)*coms.. I am sure.. it came straight from your heart.. ;) Shine My Honeycomb Love.. with my Love to you.. Smile.. *Star Light
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    Date: 5/24/2011 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Darling.. Why you blocked me... my Love
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    Date: 5/23/2011 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My Darling.. YOU have Soup-Mail.. I Love You!!!
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    Date: 5/23/2011 7:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~My Darling.. why do you still have me blocked.. if you want a Sweeeet kiss's then you have to unblock me.. so I give you one.. my Love..
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    Date: 5/23/2011 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ~My Darling.. I received Your Loving Coms.. please unblock--me.. from giving you my heartfelt coms.. for I Love you
  1. Date: 5/4/2011 11:47:00 AM
    Fabulous read I really enjoyed it.Thanks John for your very kind comment.~Teresa~

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 12:39:00 AM
    Thank you for reading my poems John. I can smell love in your poem! Savor and enjoy being in love! Well written poem. Dalila

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 6:23:00 AM
    Hello John! How are you been doing? A very nice tribute to your friend here on Soup!:) Have a nice day, my friend! Emilia:)

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 3:48:00 PM
    so beautiful & bright..craving the star that will bring you light. such love you convey through your poetry John is very powerful&intense. i hope you are well, i've been gone a while. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 3:35:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful tribute to Star light. The images are superb. Thanks for your kind comments. They always lift my spirits.

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 1:27:00 PM
    I did'nt know you felt that way, i'm flattered~~~LOL

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 10:06:00 AM
    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder brother, smile, we only have so many days to live, breathe, and try to care for each other. A very loving write here, well formed, in a gentle, compassions, endearing way, many blessings are promised by our Lord for the asking.... remember? What ever you do, the best to you always, Lucinda

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 3:18:00 AM
    John just take care of yourself... you know we care and we love you..just take care of yourself and just be you.. the John i know..Beautiful poem to the 'Aphrodite' in your heart and soul.. always C.C

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 8:35:00 PM
    as always john, as you always leave your signature smile word on your comments this poem made me smile, thanks for your comment and your lovely ways of how do leave a comment lol i feel silly when i read but so enjoy :P ja it's been a while, as you know life does get in the way of things and to be honest i'm going to post as much but i am trying as you can see! but many thanks as usual

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 12:58:00 PM
    Perfect tribute to "Beautiful Star Light", John. Thanks for stopping by. Always, Annalise