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Homeless

Note the sighing of day's retreat
Color the grey blackness of night
Drunken thievery, my feat
Of gleaming lights, beckoning frights

To begin to stir in this sea
Of a waning tumultuous falling
Baptized with his promise to me
Survival his only calling

No white bursting of the stars
In this sea of a fading fading grasp
No redeeming god, no ark
Messed up with each other perhaps

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  1. Date: 9/23/2012 6:41:00 PM

    excellent poem! redeeming? warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:22:00 PM

    JENNIFER, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 9:46:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 8:19:00 PM

    Nice piece Jenifer! Welcome to PoetrySoup dear. Please keep your creative caps on, let your passionate pen paint purposeful pages with poetic pride. Enjoy the great company of poetry people here. Love, always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 5:15:00 PM

    This is actually a rhyming poem and beautiful expressions with enforced rhyming. I see a good poet in you, jennifer

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 2:25:00 PM

    Brilliant placement of rime, with a tinge of retreating day, brings it pretty.