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Someone Stole My Shoes

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Below is the poem entitled Someone Stole My Shoes which was written by poet Wiko Te Maru. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Someone Stole My Shoes

I needed to go to school that Friday Afternoon, but Someone Stole My Shoes. He Rocked my 
shoes at school thinking he was cool but everyone looked at him like he was just A fool A 
warned out used tool. He was popular always spectacular but started to be treated regular. Had so many friends but then that soon came to an end, and his friends started to become the walls  and the floors and the sky way up high. For no one would listen to his cries at night, when he had turned of his light in the middle of the night when nothing would come right. He didn't know what was happening to his life? He walked to school lifting his head up with A smile making every moment worth while, but under that smile he was mad and sad everyone at home treated him bad, even his own Mum and Dad. Sat and ate lunch in the toilets with the door locked so the jocks wouldn't knock and know that he was like A rock or A stone sitting all alone, wishing that he could go home. He cried and watched the time go by just praying that this moment of life would fly up and disappear into the beautiful blue sky. He cried and cried, contemplating on suicide. Had no more friends and bled inside his heart, no one cared to hear his part. He looked down to the ground and saw the shoes that he stole, he cried in shame and said "Im too blame". He returned the shoes to my door and left A note and he wrote, "No one Knows you Wiko, We shouldn't judge someone until we've walked in their shoes, taken A look at their view, feel the feeling of getting abused and used and being bruised and rejected feeling like your worlds be injected and infected with A disease. And Then We have every right to Judge ones life".
 
Im so sorry I Stole Your Shoes.

- Wiko Te Maru

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  1. Date: 3/6/2011 4:14:00 PM
    Thank you Carol and Linda. Your positive feedback encourages me to write on!

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 6:49:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. we just had a contest about shoes which just closed.. sorry u missed with this one.. but keep trying and enter the contests posted for greater exposure for your work luv.. enjoy your time on Soup ... may it be filled with fun and sharing with luv..

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 3:54:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Wiko. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol