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Like no other

And she told him that she would love him
like no other woman ever will.

The accented sensuality to complete his sentences,
was her proclamation.

The Egyptian cotton blanketing her natural breasts,
sliding up his arms
as she wakes him for morning consummation;
epicenter consumption.

She told him that she craves him
beyond physical crux.

He was her equilibrium;
A key to Pandora’s shattered box.

Its fragmented sins,
now synchronous with redemption’s awakening.

Even after all these years…

Yet her heart
was wrapped
by hermetically sealed contention.

…

She told him
that she would love him
more than any other.

More than any other…

…like no other…

More than any other…

As she
strokes the pride
of another.

© Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM
    Ow gee..a declaration of love like no other and then the betrayal..A very stirring and sentimental poem.Some people are so greedy..they want it all and end up loosing it all..This is not love..the only love she seems to have is for herself..Taking and not giving in return or taking and giving to somebody else leads to all that s blank..empty..void..Extremely sad but well penned

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/8/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So well said here, Charmaine. So well said...thank you so very much!!!! =D
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Amazing write.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/7/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Twanna! Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 1:52:00 AM
    Sure is a lot of two-sided-ness going on here! It's sad to see these reoccurring elements in your poetry... I can tell it's very much apart of you. At the very least I can say it's made for some killer writing. I suppose the most emotionally inspired pieces are the ones that really grip people... you're one of a kind, mate! And the comment you made on I'll Think of a Title Later was hilarious, btw!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/30/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, bit of my life experiences. I think I can honestly say that I've heard it all. It's...amusingly sad. Thanks so very much, Tim! :)
  1. Date: 11/11/2011 1:44:00 AM
    Whoohoo! Did I just read that splendid masterpiece... I must be dreaming =). Nicely written lines and surprising parts here and there, but good altogether!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/12/2011 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's funny. :) Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind feedback.
  1. Date: 10/30/2011 10:23:00 PM
    Wow, surprising end to a complicit rhyme. I guess it happens on both sides. Great write Drake.

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 11/11/2011 1:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    True that, Elizabeth!
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 11/1/2011 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes. Yes it does. Thank you, Elizabeth. :)
  1. Date: 5/2/2011 6:08:00 AM
    Robert, thank you so very much. Yes, indeed...well said.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 5:39:00 AM
    Such are the vagaries of life and love! Interesting write.

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 4:56:00 AM
    And that was the plan Cassandra. Thank you so much!!! :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 12:04:00 AM
    Wow igniting the flame!! Great Job.. Cassandra K.

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 10:28:00 PM
    I really hope it can be, Stephen. I know others know of moments like this. You really nailed it on the head sir. Thanks so much for coming by!

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 7:32:00 PM
    Sounds like she was complicit but not compliant. Emotions ebb and wane, but true love is a rational intercourse. The heart has to trump the spasmodic mind and the fleeting, physical ingratiating of the body. You discovered this in the real world. Thanks for brokering this experience in an artistic manner. Your pain can be some other person's gain!

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 7:47:00 AM
    Wilma, yes, it really does. On both fronts. Thank you so much!!!! Hey Linda, thank you kindly. :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 3:16:00 PM
    thankxx Drake ..so sweet of u to comment on my contest entry luv.. appreciate your input and feedback .. looking forward to seeing your winners list as well luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 12:35:00 PM
    Drake this happens all too often, wanting something so bad, but it still breaks down in the end.. Brilliant piece :)

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 5:40:00 AM
    Crista, very well said. I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you so much for coming by here.

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 5:31:00 AM
    Sad betrayal that happens all to often. We should not put our trust in humankind who falters to their whims. No, but instead put your trust in the maker of heaven and earth who is faithful to keep his promise and does not delay. Good job on the poem.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 8:30:00 AM
    Hey Linda! No contest this time around. Just a simple post. Yes, the tongue really can be. Thank you darling!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 7:35:00 AM
    Yes...that was all a part of my diabolical plan. :) Thank you so much, Jem!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 7:34:00 AM
    WOW .. and WOW Drake.. intense dramatic lines so riveting my friend.. the passionate exchanges and the verbal promises are unique and delicious .. the tongue is quite the deceiver luv... good luck if for any contest .. stupendous premise luv..

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 3:28:00 PM
    Exquisitly penned sensuality, awesome twist of bittersweet too. Well done

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