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Lightning Ink

When it is darkening
And the clouds are gathering
In the heightening to start raining,
All you see is lightning brightening
Followed by loud bass hammering frightening
Not for threatening but for enlightening,
The source of an ink so inspiring
Charles melody is a lightning ink.
No need for disputing
Why wasting time debating?
For the lightning is captivating,
The ink makes you think
The melody is a remedy,
Charles melody is a lightning ink.


By: Charles Melody, (Lightning ink).

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  1. Date: 7/18/2011 6:42:00 AM

    oh you are the melodios melody that creates great poetry,kudos to you my friend.

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 2:42:00 AM

    Thanks everybody, i give God the glory for i am only a lightning grace.

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 5:02:00 AM

    Sonnet and Rhymw working together in a magnificent manner Charles .. great imagery presents itself to this piece with fascinating flow .. enjoy my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 12:54:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your self portrait? You sound like a bright and powerful personna. There is a saying The pen is mightier than the sword....makes me think of that might.

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:38:00 AM

    A nice nick name or pen name that you have chosen for yourself. Keep up the good work. soup mail mom

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 8:08:00 PM

    lighting the page, yes it does!! stunning work here, charles...:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 4:40:00 PM

    I do love watching the lightning, Charles. I like the nickname you've chosen for yourself. It really describes you to a Tee. Cool poem! Love, "mum"

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 10:44:00 AM

    I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Charles. Love, Carol