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  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:54:00 AM
    I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Fab. Love, Carol"

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 3:01:00 PM
    enjoyed the feel of this Fabiyas, and thank you for commenting on the winning write of mine.

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Very interesting poem, Fabiyas and I like the analogy here as well :) Have a wonderful week :)

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 9:43:00 PM
    HI! FABIYAS,, HOW ARE YOU?... A WILD POEM AND DEEP WAYS OF SHOWING YOUR WAYS.. ENJOYED,..P.D.

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 9:52:00 AM
    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 9:50:00 AM
    :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Fabiyas! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 11:32:00 PM
    Very interesting the things of your culture brought into this one , Fabiyas, Nice descriptiion of the woman in this poem.

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Awesome the way you describe the "paddy smell" of the woman's soul. Our souls can be bright lights at times, glowing with purity, but this is a terrific analogy of a soul that has been lost in the paddy. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 3:13:00 PM
    beautiful personification , the expressions lures to visit India soon, Fabiyas. I hope you are fine, not much seen, nowadays.

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 6:46:00 AM
    Fabiyas - The fragrance of freshly harvested paddy nicely portryed. Thnx for reading my verse "Queen of Hearts " and leaving inspiring comments. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 5:17:00 AM
    Such sweet lines of tender luv FABIYAS and luv your rhyme scheme..very interesting my friend and so unique to this piece.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 4:24:00 AM
    Interesting work..Not sure about the interpertation..Paddy is a place where animals are kept right...Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
    descriptive images prancing all over the lines... great use of enrgetic alliteration, fabiyas.. good luck! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
    descriptive images prancing all over the lines... great use of enrgetic alliteration, fabiyas.. good luck! :) huggs, nette