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polite words mask
a plague insincere
spreading wildly

as meaningless
masks of false kindness 
hide true feelings

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  1. Date: 3/1/2011 6:50:00 AM
    Heya. I am just trying out this form myself. In the 2nd line, the 3rd syllable should rhyme with the 4th syllable of the 1st line. And the 2nd syllable of the 3rd line should rhyme with the 2nd line etc....if this poem isn't a Than Bauk and was labelled wrong by accident, please ignore this comment entirely. Yes, false kindness can mask true feelings that are contradictive to the presented masks~Chris