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NADAMETINE

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NADAMETINE

Iridescence and subliminal flow has condensed within your fragrant bower,
a scene of isolated beauty that portrays the essence of all splendour and redeeming 
power.

You are repose and renewal to my longing soul
which in hunger for such a sight could have stayed unrequited still!
barren and with plighted role unto my desperate ill.

Now seen suffused in the radiant glow of you, like mirrors
are placed  surrounding flowers inset in your resting place or in bunches, 
frieze like and still, are coloured floral showers.

They experience no passing hour, in lilac clad repose, you gift this domain
with abundant russet locks a’ spray in a cascade of feral purity
shining vibrant gleams, diaphanous and serenity proclaimed.

You exude ephemeral and delicate majesty in coalescence 
with this limpid mystic scene, pure spiritual visions profound combine 
with siren-like illusion seen.

Desire calls as from traces etched on heavenly walls,
reflected pinions fan-like show through emerald hued illumination
in subtle sweeps below the surface of this inviolable creation. 


© Joe Maverick 21-02-2011

Footnote: I have written this piece for the Reflections contest by Constance La 
France. This is a fictional write and I ascribe none of the above attributes to the 
scene or character names, these same attributes belonging solely to Yahwah, the 
one God manifest as Father, Son and Holy Spirit.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2012 10:25:00 PM
    Oh, missed this contest, Joe, but wishing you congratulations with his superbe write! "Reflectons" of your intricately beautiful inner core, Joe. Wonderful imagery! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 5:00:00 PM
    Joe, I can't find one of yours I haven't read. Are you taking a break? I do love Joyce very much. She truly inspires me and many others here and she has so much talent. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 11:28:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your win, Joe. You know I was away for a while. We never know what judges are going to like when we write for their contests. I think that adds to the fun of composing for them, don't you? It's a hit or miss most of the time, but you definitely had a hit here! WAy to go, Joe. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 2:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Joe. Enjoyed this beautiful one. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 12:08:00 PM
    Congratulations Joe on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest "Reflection" Joe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 1:28:00 PM
    Hey Joe, congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 6:56:00 PM
    Awesome Job Joe, Good to see you in the top 10. Congratulations on your worthy poem's ninth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 11:16:00 AM
    Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest myf riend.. a superb entry.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend... thankxx for your many sweet comments on my poetry Joe.. much appreciated luv..

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 6:26:00 AM
    Lots of lovely words here..congrats on your fine win. BG

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 12:22:00 AM
    Such awesome words you used, Joe. And a very unique name you gave the character. Congrats on your win. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 8:11:00 PM
    Knew this would be on the winning list Joe. It is beautiful. Many congratulations for this big win.

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 7:42:00 PM
    Congrats Joe on your well deserved win with this excellent write!---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:38:00 PM
    Way to go, Joe. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest.

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:37:00 PM
    a toast to your nadametine and my nadinne, joe.. happy congrats! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 5:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on nthe ninth place win in the contest of Constance, Joe

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:14:00 AM
    A really beautiful write Joe, I hope Constance like it just as much as I do :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 12:11:00 AM
    the descriptions are incredible, this is such a vibrant and colourful piece,joe! awesome with winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 5:29:00 PM
    Thank you for supporting my contest.

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