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  1. Date: 2/22/2011 11:18:00 AM
    How sad you had to loser her "in a heartbeat," Stephen. She sounds special. Lovely poem! Love and best wishes always, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 2:17:00 PM
    I had a "one guy" who was the best hand holder ever. Wow I miss that!!

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  1. Date: 2/20/2011 1:02:00 PM
    I'm studying you think you need the "by" line 2? remember strict 5/7/5/7/7 is no longer needed in modern English writing of Japanese form..and line 5 maybe include a sensation? gone like the wind's heartbeat..what do you thinK? just trying to talk to poets to learn about tanks writing. Light & Love