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Moon for Dinner

The night falls 
and me and a friend are having a walk
He looks up the sky and says stare up high
the moon looks ugly
I look at it and think, then say:
Someone ate the moon
It seems so tasty but it makes you so wasty
It look so cool but it makes you a fool
As we dazzled up high we laughed with a cry
A car comes by and we say good-bye
But thank you God cause we didn't die
I farted, he peed
He cried, I screamed!!
The man comes out, he wants to knock us out
While he was swaying he was saying:
What's this smell? The floor is so wet
Why do you cry? As if your momma died
We stand up saying as if we were playing:
Shut up punk! Your momma's so fat!
The cops come down asking what was down
I ate the moon, I say like a fool
He looked up strait and fell with a praise
I felt like a God but I'm just a mod
I go to the guy tell him he will die
He punched me high making me fly
My friend was a freak, he gave a big shriek
Everyone left and I was left
My friend gazed as he hold me strait
And told me that I have to write that
I said okay and you're so gay.

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  1. Date: 3/24/2011 7:42:00 AM

    Nice Win Sami.....Congratulations, Judy

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 11:37:00 AM

    Congrats on a well deserved win, Sami. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:42:00 AM

    A big congratulations on your win Sami. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 9:56:00 AM

    Coming back here to congratulate you Sami :) Enjoyed this poem-- way to go on your win :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 6:50:00 AM

    Congrats Sami on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write .. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 5:05:00 AM

    Oh wow! I didn't think that this poem would even be in the top 10... :S :D Happy I am to be :P

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 11:42:00 PM

    hmmm, it sounds to me like someone was HIGH in this story. Congratulations. A very interesting poem and loved its title.

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 11:31:00 AM

    Hi Sami :) Very interesting story you have here, your title caught my eye and that sure is a unique thing to say, eating the moon-- glad that everything was fine in the end and that you got inspired to write this - enjoyed reading this :D

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 4:26:00 AM

    Thank you! I wrote this to my friend after a consequence of events... :P I am really glad you liked it.. Thank you

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 4:10:00 PM

    What a poetic expressions on Moon for dinner, Sami