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Life of Pain 'Senryu'

Lord accept this man---
whose only joy in this life
was embracing death. 

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 5:03:00 AM

    soupmail (something on reading this one again)

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 5:30:00 PM

    Intense thought to reflect on Harry. PS you have an amazing following - how do you manage responding? Amazing!

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 2:02:00 AM

    Very insightful Senryu you have penned here harry.Enjoyed----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 5:07:00 PM

    Deep and powerful senryu, Harry. Sadly, there are many people who "embrace death" because their lives were so hard. Excellent senryu, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 10:37:00 AM

    Awesome, as profound a statement Harry, as I've seen in a Senryu. Good job. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 10:16:00 PM

    Well, I am back to where I was the last time I came and saw this toward the top! it really was a beauty!

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 4:01:00 PM

    Oh, great one, Harry! Ouch, what a raw way to look at it though.

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 5:31:00 AM

    whew! powerful, Harry!

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 3:15:00 AM

    So sad and beautifully expressed.

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 1:26:00 AM

    Sounds like he didn't have much of a life. Written very well.

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 12:35:00 AM

    oh, my goodness, how profound and how sad. I have to fave this one!!