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Whispers

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                             '.Hello,I'm glad i got to know you'
                                   these were our first words

                          'Goodbye,trust time and it will show you'
                                      these were our last

                                   and we became the past

                                    of many dulcet dreams
                                      in new tomorrows
 

                                      Hello!!Goodbye!!
                                           I'm Here
                                  with and without you
                                  i lost you and i found you
                                   to loose you once again
                                        in yesterday
                       


                            

















 




                                         

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  1. Date: 5/27/2011 12:45:00 PM

    Profound write, showcasing the bright light and deep shadow that love can be. Regards, Robert.

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:07:00 PM

    Glad I came and found this one here. The last part is so poignant, as all your poetry is, dear.

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:37:00 PM

    Smile ~ Carrying such a childlike enchantedness yet brushed amid, "The Qualities & Colours of, 'A Master Poetess & Artist In, Brilliant Bright!!!'" ~ "My Love to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:30:00 PM

    Smile ~ "No, 'Your Beauty,' I Doubt That 'Anyone' Would 'Ever' Wish to Be Lost Unto My 'Dear, Precious & Beautiful, Lovely Cinderella!!!'" ~ As I have read amid a couple of coms in regards unto, "Your Treasurous Self; 'Yes, A Soulful Depth; Beyond Beautiful' Amid, 'Your Majestical Verse!!!'" ~ Very rare when one can thus be found, holding such deepened wells of heart while as at the very same moment ~ Cont:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:12:00 AM

    if things are meant to be, the path comes back around..nice write on loss..TAH

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:09:00 AM

    Oh, sweetie, this is painful to read. I know it comes straight from your heart and I hope you find the love you feel has been lost. If it helps at all, I love you! Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:25:00 AM

    what a very bittersweet yet beautiful write, Celene-- makes me wish that there is a part two-- and speaks of hello again ;)-- hugs to you :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 11:24:00 AM

    This well written, bittersweet verse can be a torment, CC but that's life. If yesterday's gone, so let it be, 'cause tomorrow, if it is meant to be, is sure to come for you two. Love to you, Annalise