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SUICIDAL

Suicidal! his own problem
The wrought of his failures
Reducing himself
His deceiving pleasures
The trials
And temptations
He succumbed 
The remorse
His down fall!
Leading to his back fall
All is himself
Self war
Suicidal!


By: Charles melody (Lightning ink).

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  1. Baity Avatar
    ChiquitaChiamaka Baity
    Date: 9/18/2011 2:14:00 PM
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    this is great Charles... "Self War"...great description...thanks for sharing my friend... i look forward to reading more of your great writes...smiles....Chiquita
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    JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO
    Date: 4/29/2011 12:47:00 AM
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    Touchy subject. I may need to re read this one. I like the poem, Could you expand on it to me. I would love to think I am wrong about this one! ~JSLambert

    Melody Lightning Ink Avatar Charles Melody Lightning Ink Date: 6/17/2011 7:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OK, IT TALKS ABOUT SOME PEOPLE WHO CAUSE THEIR OWN DOWN FALL.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/17/2011 8:11:00 AM
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    hello, Charles,, nice to see you comment on my poem,, How are you?? well i know this strong deep feeling,, when the world comes crashing down,, sure enjoyed,..p.d.

    Melody Lightning Ink Avatar Charles Melody Lightning Ink Date: 6/17/2011 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANKS PD, I POSTED A NEW POEM AND GUESS WHAT? U ARE IN IT.
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 2/17/2011 7:15:00 AM
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    It is the point where a person feels he has no where to turn and should seek help. It is a sad thing in life when someone decides to take this road for problems can be solved and resolved. It is a war within itself but one that has to be won. love mom
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/16/2011 4:35:00 PM
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    Yes, he wrought this through his own failures. It's mostly from our mistakes that these feelings would start to emerge.

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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/16/2011 3:07:00 PM
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    Self War ..so true .. this is how suicide has risen so everywhere .. your words speak volumes to this ongoing problem Charles and a true picture of the process luv.. thankxxx for sharing ..luv..
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 2/16/2011 10:54:00 AM
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    We do feel battles within ourselves sometimes, dear son, but suicide is never the answer. I pray you are not having such thoughts. If people turned to suicide every time the feel they have failed, there would be no one left to enjoy Earth's bounty. Love, "mum"
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/16/2011 9:40:00 AM
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    Good idea..Yes, when we war within ourselves it is like a slow suicide...Sara


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