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  1. Date: 2/19/2011 5:32:00 PM
    Your fans are clamoring for more, Stephen! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:42:00 AM
    genuine love wrought this true feelings.. well done man. love, lightning ink.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:05:00 PM
    Sadly,away from her light. I really like how you told this sad little tale and especially that last stanza. Expressing how you missed out on her passion!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:52:00 AM
    As we so often hear, Stephen, "Go toward the light." That's where you'll find the women who will not break your heart, ladies who would appreciate a wonderful man like you. Those who hang out in the darkness are not usually the ones who really want a kind and loving man in their lives. But, hey, I'm no expert on relationships. I just want to meet someone whose heart burns with the light of truth. And we never find the right person when we're looking desperately. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:47:00 AM
    Simply beautiful, endearing words to express your passion for someone, Stephen. Always enjoy your wonderful work. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 4:17:00 AM
    oh, stephen... this will delight women for its sentimental and honest rant... just brilliant! if for a contest, winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 3:34:00 AM
    Very good poem. I love it. If most men could realise that. It would be grand!

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 1:24:00 AM
    i know your name but not your passion,intriguing verse indeed,so nice to read you again,gentle fury:)