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Unspeakable Love

Your smile firm raises walls on my peace.
Times we gave up return without cease,
   Nights we chose to forget
   Are gasping for a breath
Neath pilows wet from sweat, tears and a kiss.

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  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:43:00 PM

    Nice write on the theme of the contest, valeria

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:12:00 PM

    I like the rhyme of kiss with peace and cease. It shows a cute accent! A passionate limerick there!

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:23:00 PM

    Nice Limerick---enjoyed------kashinath

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:48:00 PM

    Good limerick. It contains decent descriptiveness and rhyme.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:32:00 PM

    Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara