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Testify

Waterfall symphony, strikes
Mother Nature’s redemption!
Our side of heaven, with
no gates…grass, greener.

© Drake J. Eszes 
*John Freeman's Dodoitsu contest: 2nd place! WOO HOO!*

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:41:00 PM

    well done.... Congratulations.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 5/8/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much! :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:00:00 PM

    Congratulations Drake on this well deserved win!! I'm so enjoying your work 'Poet'! Lol the only place the grass will be greener ;) hugs Deb

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 4/22/2013 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL indeed! Hi Deborah! Very cool to meet you and thank you so much for your words! :)
  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:01:00 PM

    Wish I held the baton for the symphony Drake, your imagination takes you to fascinating places and I love to come along! - You really give me such nice feelings when you visit. Can't thank you enough for your kind words

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 10/10/2011 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I really appreciate that. As with you coming by this way too. It's an awesome thing. Thank you as always!
  1. Date: 3/28/2011 6:47:00 PM

    Hi Teresa! Thank you so much for that. :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 1:20:00 PM

    Oh what words.Congrats on 2nd.place win.Thank-you so very much for the kind comment Drake.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 6:57:00 AM

    That's quite the interesting comment. I can fully respect that and I definitely grasp where you're coming from with that statement. As for those with your viewpoint, one can only wonder...but, a person like me would stand by your side no matter what. If, for nothing else, humanity's sake. Thank you for coming by here C.L.!!! :)

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 4:34:00 AM

    Hey Kacey! =) I placed 2nd actually. Thank you for coming thru!

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 5:58:00 PM

    WOOHOO.HOPE YOU WIN.COOL.......MAD LOVE FOR YOU.

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 5:21:00 AM

    Hey Tahera! Really awesome of you to say!! =) Thank you!

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 4:31:00 AM

    Waterfall symphony Wow Drake this is super good. Love the whole dodoitsu.

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 6:56:00 PM

    Indeed Debbie...thank you so very much! I placed 2nd. YAY!

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 5:00:00 PM

    hard song to sing! good luck, Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 4:45:00 PM

    I'll have to look into that. Thank you very much, Linda! =)

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 4:00:00 PM

    Drake u might like my Extra Extra Extraordinary entry for John Heck's contest.. would appreciate your opinion luv on this difficult theme.. thankxxx...

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 11:25:00 PM

    @ Carol, Linda, & Annalise, thank you so much for your very kind words. I'm grateful to have been placed so high up with this message.

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 9:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on you fine 2nd Place win in John's Contest, Drake. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 11:21:00 AM

    Congrats Drake on a super second place win in John's contest .. super entry ..super win.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on this excellent poem placing 2nd in John's contest Drake. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 3:26:00 AM

    Mr. Freeman, thank you SO much for this! I'm truly pleased to hear I ranked so high. Your words are very appreciated sir. @ Deb, yes the "waterfall symphony" are just a combo of two of my favorite things. It was my pleasure to read your work, I shall continue to do so. We all deserve to be seen & heard. @ Andrea, I firmly believe our Heaven should not have any gates. Thank you very much!

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:55:00 PM

    love that it is with no gates. Clever! And congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 7:50:00 PM

    Most excellent writing. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. This is really very good. I love the analogies drawn with the 'waterfall symphony' and 'our side of heaven'. Best wishes. Deb ps. Also, thank you for reading and commenting on my work. It means a great deal that you would take time to do this.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:32:00 PM

    Extremely happy to see you at the top Drake. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place honor, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:40:00 AM

    Miranda, yes it really is. Especially for me since I'm not that good with keeping my feelings to a short burst. LOL. I do thank you. As for your work, oh I'll be back to read more. :) Thank you for coming by here! Truly...

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:20:00 AM

    So descriptive for just 4 lines, isn't it amazing what can be done with words... thanks for reading my poetry, hope to see many more from you, as you will from me....Miranda L.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 6:00:00 AM

    That's excellent Anthony. Great minds. Thank you for coming by here.

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 12:59:00 PM

    I have one called "testify"as well...thanx for the comments

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 12:01:00 PM

    @ Wilma, thank you SO SO much for your kind words. @ Caryl, that's sweet of you to say. Thank you! =)

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 11:54:00 AM

    A wonderful write and entry. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:18:00 PM

    I really love your entry Drake, wishing you all the best for John's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:33:00 AM

    Hey Sara! Thank you so much! =) I'm glad you did...

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