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i know its true

theres something about you
that draws me in
is it your smile?
that is the highlight of every day
your voice?
so soft and sweet 
the way you hold me?
always warm and inviting
or is it your eyes?
so kind...captivating...beautiful
no word will ever be good enough
to use when describing you
i couldnt even get close
all i know
is that youre in my life now
bringing joy
with each new day
and i know im so lucky
to hear you say
"i love you"
beause every time
i know its true
and i know 
that no one will ever love you 
the way that i do.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2011 6:56:00 PM

    You have expressed nice thioughts on I know its true, katie

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 10:28:00 AM

    Another nicely worded essay for Valentine's Day. Take a look at the fifth line from the bottom. Did you really mean to type "and I know I'm so lucky"? That is the only thing I see that needs correction.