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Inside My Thoughts Jan 20 2010

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Inside My Thoughts Jan 20 2010

Longing to live a normal life,
with out suffering any mental reprecutions.
Living with a lot of limited abilities,
as I check off the many mental deductions.

I have to wake up every morning for my daily dose of candy, 
just to get me through the day.
I depend on my medicine to keep me on track,
and helps me resist the urge to stray.

When evening time rolls around,
I get to do it all over again.
Another dose to guide me thought the night,
without it there would be a sin.

I would give almost anything, 
for just one day without my candy bowl.
I want to be free without consequence,
I want to be mentally complete and whole.

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  1. Date: 2/12/2011 10:02:00 PM
    Just one questionable item exists in the second line of your first verse: there is no such word as "reprocutions". Are you sure you don't mean either "retrocessions" or "retrogressions"? Everything else looks acceptable.