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winter's last breath

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winter's last breath

a soft warm breeze sings
joy as spring bursts with fresh air
icicles dripping
tears of winter's dying breath
as my heart thaws, missing you

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  1. Date: 2/20/2011 1:30:00 PM
    very good entry for my contest ;) We aren't Japanese but Please! I can see a lover sending this in reply to a haiku ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 8:28:00 AM
    Tears of winter's breath dying to I love reading your poetry. Jodie Q.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 11:29:00 PM
    Beautiful, just how I imagine all good tanka poems should be!

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 5:25:00 PM
    This beautiful Tanka you've written perhaps will hurry spring on it's journey, Stephen. Always, Annalise.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 5:13:00 PM
    Glad that someone is thawing..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 4:41:00 PM
    I hate to think of you having a frozen heart, Stephen, so I'm glad winter's last breath is melting the ice. Such a lovely tanka, dear. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 4:31:00 PM
    I hope winter soon takes its last breaths. I'm so sick of the cold. Nice tanka describing this inevitable season.