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Canine Guilt

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Below is the poem entitled Canine Guilt which was written by poet michelle prital. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Canine Guilt

My Shar-pei's eyes are watching me
With a look of pure disdain
I know she's keeping tabs on me
I wish I could explain
 
Don't judge me. my ole canine friend
My life's a tad bit hectic.
To walk you now would aggravate
My ulcer's turning peptic
 
I hide your leash, avoid the door
But still I see you peering
My eyes implore,"Please understand" 
But yet I see you leering!
 
Oh to be judged by fur and snout
Is a fate I do not relish
By choosing not to take you out
My future could be hellish!

If I were to be judged right now
By a jury of my peers
I'd lose the case, take the fall
To a pair of floppy ears

So, "Come on girl. Let's go out"
I'll open up the gate
Take me to the nearest tree
My schedule can wait




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  1. Date: 10/13/2011 10:57:00 AM

    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments Michelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Love, Carol

    Billheimer Avatar Clarence Billheimer Date: 10/14/2011 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments on my poem "Autumn." This one is cute.
    prital Avatar michelle prital Date: 10/14/2011 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Carol, I am puzzled. I just finished writing the poem using lines from 5 songs...where did the contest go? Did I miss it? Could I still post it?
  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Michelle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/3/2011 8:03:00 AM

    You should enter this in the "pick a pet" member contest :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2011 9:11:00 PM

    Well done Michelle. I felt as though I was in the room. You paint a vivid picture with your pen. I'd like to recomend a pet story of mine. I'm sorry that it's sad but it's the only one I have. It's titled "Canine Demise". Thanks again for letting me read your words. Rockman :-)

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 11:09:00 AM

    Thank you all for your comments. Your encouragement gives me the "oomff" to contine writing Michelle

    prital Avatar michelle prital Date: 6/29/2011 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops, continue
  1. Date: 6/28/2011 5:51:00 AM

    My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, michelle

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 6:36:00 PM

    I liked this one. I just walked my son's dog, and his hind leg came up on every pole or bush for three blocks. Congrats on the feature. Vince

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 6:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. I enjoyed the internal struggle vs. the puppy dog eyes. Very cute.

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 5:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Michelle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:33:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Michelle. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

    prital Avatar michelle prital Date: 6/29/2011 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!
    prital Avatar michelle prital Date: 6/29/2011 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!