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Silent visitor

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Silent visitor

dress in pure white
disclose in morning curtain
unwelcome beauty

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  1. Date: 2/17/2011 8:51:00 PM

    "Unwelcome beauty" gives the poem it's personal touch. Very nice.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 11:32:00 AM

    Last line makes it slight intriguing!nicely written Haiku--kashinath

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 7:32:00 AM

    This sure got me smiling, Noriko :) beautiful and intriguing image you paint here with your haiku-- your title drew me in and happy that it did :)

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 1:00:00 AM

    wow, great imagery, well it's just nature's beauty, inevitably unavoidable. Thanks for sharing this great piece with us, I am adding this to my favorite. Please keep painting your poetry pad with the cute colours of creativity. Hope to read more from you. Have a great weekend dear friend! Love always, Adeleke.

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 9:38:00 PM

    I agree with Robert's comment below. Either way, you wrote this haiku in a way that there is a lot of mystery left to the words, which was very well done~Chris

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 9:05:00 PM

    Sounds intriguing!! (hmmm, maybe Robert down here got it, and I agree with his assessment).

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 7:42:00 PM

    If you are describing a morning winter snowfall with this haiku, then you have done a marvelous job.