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I dream to be your dream

I dream to become 
that dream which comes in your sleep
kissing your soft mind
and leaving your sleeping face
ever glowing with bright smile.




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By:kashinath karmakar (11th Feb.2011)





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  1. Date: 8/8/2012 2:27:00 PM

    guess what? I had faved this one twice by mistake, but I'll keep it that way. It deserves it!!!

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 1:33:00 PM

    Quiet a nice tanka really enjoyed it.Thanks for the comment and the congrats.~LOTS OF LOVE~Teresa

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 11:27:00 AM

    such poetic words written for the contest,which shows love and deep emotion, dreams are suppose to be beautiful, and your dream definitely is outstandingly beautiful,,all the best,,and Thank you for visiting my words,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:51:00 AM

    Do hope you the best in the contest cause this is Amaaazing! Love it, Sami

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 3:42:00 PM

    You can be my dream anytime kashinath. I like the romance in this poem. Good luck in the contest, Diane

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 12:11:00 AM

    very beautiful

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:42:00 PM

    omg i loved it .... keep up the good work luv

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 2:17:00 AM

    Hot dream indeed,Kashinath.Nicely penned.Wonderful entry for the contest.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 3:51:00 PM

    OOO ! what a dream, Kas. Kar. ~mighty tastyyyy.. sure love it.. all it needs is a box of choclates.. .. take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,.. Linda

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 7:59:00 AM

    Good luck in the contest...I like your Tanka........George

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 5:50:00 AM

    Again I am enjoying these breathtaking lines on this special day of luv dear heart..wishing u a most Happy Valentine's Day with lots and lots of luv ..

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 7:25:00 AM

    a rare and wonderful occasion. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 4:43:00 AM

    Kash, I love this, a pure delight to read this afternoon.. All the best for MJF's contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 4:28:00 AM

    kashi!! woohoo delight for valentine!! amazing, tender write.. go and win!! ;) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 11:12:00 PM

    Hey, that is cool. Gert calls this one a Sentanka, it's extra special!

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 10:55:00 AM

    What a beautiful, romantic dream! Good luck in the contest kashinath. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 8:50:00 AM

    Enjoyed the read of your nice "Sentanka" (I call this on a Sentanka because it is a Senryu combined with the form of a Tanka). Wish you best of siúccess in the contest, Kashinath!......Gert

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 7:39:00 PM

    a beautiful and lovely dream, I love it, and best of luck in the contest~~

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:55:00 PM

    Great imagination, Kashinath.

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 12:49:00 PM

    Nice write on the dream, kashinath

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 10:27:00 AM

    What a lovely entry for the contest, Kashinath! You have such a loving heart. Best wishes for success, my friend. Your tanka made me smile. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 9:39:00 AM

    In case I forgot to click on 7.

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 9:38:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL, Kashinath. I hope this shoots to the top of the chart. (now I have to think of a wild and crazy one but I am trying to decide if he prefers actual dream or wish/dream type,like you have done.) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 8:37:00 AM

    well smiles are definitely in order for this one, kashinath! wishing you the best in the contest :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 6:20:00 AM

    Romantic words of emotion Kashinath my friend.. enjoyed your Tanka entry for Michael's contest.. much good luck.. a dream like this will want to be had by many ... bright smile is so warming luv..

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:40:00 AM

    excellent with feeling. Leaves the reader smiling. Enjoyed- Robert

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:28:00 AM

    Good work..Enjoyed ..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:14:00 AM

    This is a sweet poem. Gisele