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Evil has Gone

I’ve stared evil in the face
And feed into its lies
I ignored all the signs
Saying my goodbyes

My life was almost lost
Nearly gave it away for free
Not knowing my path was cursed
I leaped willingly 

I suffered a great while
not understanding why 
until a man entered my life
showing me what to live by 

Now I've been set straight 
no reason for remorse
we are to have a baby 
what a beautiful new course  

by: Virginia Frayer

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  1. Date: 2/11/2011 7:08:00 PM

    Nice writing, but I don't believe it qualifies as an enclosed rhyming poem. The rhyming scheme should be abba, not abab as you have it above.

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 3:07:00 PM

    New life makes all the difference..They add joy to life...Those fans' hum can be soothing especially when faced with noisy surroundings at night..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara