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for you

you take my heart and
b     e      k
    r      a
it...you make me feel like im..       
                                                   g                                           
                                        n 
                             i
                  y
         l
f
then you break my heart and make me

F
  A
     L
       L

I fall so hard and hit the ground with a 
THUD

but my 

L         OOOO   V         V   EEEEE
L         O     O    V       V    E
L         O     O     V     V     EEE
L         O     O      V  V       E
LLLLL  OOOO        V         EEEEE
is still and always will be 

for:


YOU

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  1. Date: 6/16/2011 6:18:00 AM

    wow! nice for,,, and shapes... sad when we don't give... but it all fly's out the window... and mends.. together ,, always,..Linda

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 7:53:00 AM

    It's sad when we love someone and they continue to hurt us, Elizabeth. You must love him a lot. Very creative layout and clearly expressed sentiments of both pain and love. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 3:16:00 PM

    Soup mail ....

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 6:27:00 AM

    good poem.

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 11:41:00 PM

    CUTE!!!

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 1:38:00 PM

    I love this form but feel your hurt throughout it... Smile Angel.... Soup mail 4 u.....luv Michael

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 9:00:00 AM

    very creative...TAH