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Snow

in a moment of contented thought - the snow floats down to meet me -
like a small child emerging from a deep nights sleep - i stretch out my hand and 
receive a tender kiss - that chills my fingertips and warms my heart -
my hair becomes like frosting on a birthday cake - as tiny, perfect promises of 
laughter begin to cover my being -

too delighted with the wintry gift to shake it away - i invite it to stay and play a 
while - and as memories of a past childhood come into view - i am infused with new 
life and sweet energy - and there is a new found meaning to my day...

as long as the snow floats down to meet me - I will make time - for snow

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  1. Date: 3/2/2011 6:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 3:21:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in the contest.....George

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 7:43:00 PM

    Congrats Lisa on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 11:44:00 AM

    Congratulations Lisa, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 4:15:00 PM

    :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 12:35:00 AM

    Congratulations to thee, Lisa Lee.

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 12:14:00 AM

    I share your love of the cool stuff....nicely written.....I like it a lot.....congratulations...Syd

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:18:00 PM

    You sure got me smiling with this lovely poem, Lisa :) very sweet & inspiring & liked the images you give here :) congrats on your win :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:43:00 PM

    wonderful wonderful for memories of snow and making time for it, Lisa. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Chris, Lisa

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:54:00 PM

    Wonderful write..its is a happy piece and made me feel good.. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:33:00 PM

    Lisa, great poem, congratulations with this worthy poem success placing in the top ten. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:36:00 AM

    Very nice, Lisa! Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 9:51:00 AM

    Lisa, thank you for entering this most uplifting poem in my contest!~Chris

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 9:07:00 AM

    Cool congrats Lisa on your winning poem in the Winter Free Verse contest with this excellent entry on Snow.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 10:03:00 AM

    Very nice poem...Jimmy

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 4:40:00 AM

    wow! Great imagery, thanks for sharing this.I enjoyed this piece. hey you are gonna make a great poet. Take time to learn from & interact more with the great pens here. welcome to the loveliest poetry community. please keep writing! Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 10:48:00 PM

    Nice thoughts penned here.I think the form is prose poetry---kashinath