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Blue

Oxygen like Love
Often taken for granted
Lack one of the two
Face the harsh reality
You will soon be turning blue

Joe Incatasciato  Contest- Blue

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  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 6:56:00 AM
    Hey Joe! Adding a tint of humour gives this even more colour depth. Congratulations again, on this piece that I hadn't seen. Must mean that I should take more time reviewing the contests. You rock, Joe!! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 9:02:00 PM
    Congratulating.. Joe, nice... thanks for sharing... have a nice one...p.d.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 7:58:00 PM
    Interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 5:33:00 PM
    a comic take how original Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 8:14:00 AM
    Congrats Joe on your big win in this contest!Wonderful Tanka !--kashinath

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 7:42:00 AM
    Congrats Joe on your super win in the blue contest with this awesome piece and terrific entry luv.. enjoy..

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 10:16:00 PM
    Aha, the very clever one appears!! Congratulations, JOE! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 7:50:00 PM
    This sure read like a winner. many congratulations dear friend.

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 7:03:00 PM
    Way to go, Joe. I thought I had commented on this one earlier, but apparently not. Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest.

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 3:37:00 PM
    Congratulations Joe, on your honored placement. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 2:07:00 PM
    Wow! This is really impressive. This comparison seems so simple; but there are so many complexities when it comes to love oxygen. We definitely need both to live and breathe. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 1:54:00 PM
    So true Joe, no air means blue very soon, you have a wonderful sense of humour shown in many of your poems, congrats on your win~~

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 1:52:00 PM
    Congratulations on your great win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Joe! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 12:14:00 PM
    So pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 12:08:00 PM
    Hi Joe - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 11:08:00 AM
    Hello Joe, Congratulations on your win. I loved this, it made me LOL Very Witty As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 10:50:00 AM
    Very witty tanka & I really like that last line, Joe! Enjoyed reading your take on the challenge -- Congras on your win :D

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 10:26:00 AM
    congrats on your 8th place in the contest Joelove the double meaning in the last line

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 9:52:00 AM
    Works really well Joe. Good luck in contest

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