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BLUE

In mystic waves dive
Sea guards a stern endlessness.
Waken brunts of sky
Rush to blend into my mind,
As I smell the coming dawn.

"blue"-valeria iliadou

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 6:36:00 AM
    awesome valeria, enjoyed this gem. Harry

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 10:50:00 PM
    Nicely done, valeria. I enjoyed your interpretation of blue! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 8:04:00 PM
    Nice write, but watch the syllable count. You have one too many syllables in all lines except the first.

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 5:43:00 PM
    Nice write onthe blue, good luck in the contest, valeria