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Shooting Star

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Shooting Star

You are a shooting star.
You're light shines here from far.
A burning fire in the sky.
To dream, like a star, you fly.

To let the insults of the world pass you by.
Always keep your head held high.
As a dreamer you are strong.
To keep following the dream along.

Keep pushing forth with all your might.
Never give up your will to fight.
Find strength deep within your light.
Keep your fire burning bright.

Though there are people that doubt.
Follow your dreams, don't push them out.
Within yourself, believe in you.
When you follow your dream they will come true.

As a shooting star leaves a trail of dust.
In your dreams you must trust.
Let your dreams take you far.
For in everyone lives a shooting star.

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  1. Date: 2/8/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Beautiful!

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 1:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem and win in my contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 11:44:00 AM
    Congrats on a well deserved win, Mike. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:44:00 AM
    A big congratulations on your win Michael. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:01:00 AM
    What a very inspiring message you give here, Michael :) Congrats on your win :) I really like what you say here, especially your last line...

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:18:00 AM
    I agree that a shooting star is inside everyone. Enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest!~Chris

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 6:54:00 AM
    Congrats Michael on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv.. excellent entry...

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 11:46:00 PM
    Hey, this is very nice, and what a positive message you give with it. Congratulations on the winners' circle, Michael.

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 12:00:00 PM
    nicely done..TAH