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  1. Date: 2/8/2011 4:21:00 PM
    I am interpreting this just as I see it, forgive me if I'm wrong, but I do understand how you could be side-tracked, Gentle Fury.. that was a kind of "fatal attraction". : ) Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 9:29:00 AM
    Actually, this could be perceived as a "political poem," as I feel the American people have fallen into a black hole. Still, I know you were talking about an attraction that grips your heart. It's sad when we succumb to the darkness others cast upon our souls. Very cool title to describe this, Stephen! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 4:14:00 AM
    This is cool, the add on is interesting. You could, only a suggestion, expand this into a political poem. Politics as mistress. Or hubris as mistress, the seduction. It is good as is.