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Spring Tide




Horizon stretching
azure shades midst rolling waves
spring tides unleashing.





a haiku from your window for Michael J. Falotico's competition
written by Déirdre Ó Maidín

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  1. Date: 2/20/2011 4:54:00 AM

    excellent entry, Deirdre. The reader is there. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:11:00 AM

    wow, how did I miss this awesome one? So wonderful, Deirdre.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 10:35:00 AM

    Hi Deirdre. Thanks for the visit,. I am working on some prose at the moment and planning our trip to Germany. Loved this. You are fantastic at Haiku. Makes me long for long days and beach weather. Great piece, purely atmospheric. Eamon

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 11:11:00 PM

    like a painting!

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 6:27:00 PM

    Best of luck in Michael's contest, Deirdre. Very picturesque Haiku...beautiful! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 1:58:00 PM

    So you can see the sea from your window as well, Deirdre. Really love the description of the waves in that second line. It's so nice to see those azure shades on calm days. Today's we're having a storm and the waves are pretty fierce -- grey and stormy. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 12:41:00 PM

    wonderful and totally descriptive, deirdre! best of luck to you! :) huggs, nette