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  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:05:00 PM
    Or I should say,you still have hope!

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:04:00 PM
    It's more with optimistim than regret, I would think, gentle fury! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 6:20:00 PM
    I think your romantic side is just shy or asleep, Stephen. As much as you love animals and nature, there's no way you could be hollow inside. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 1:49:00 PM
    Very very witty but very meaningful write... hollow inside..4t, Stephen

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 11:09:00 AM
    Your words always reach out and grab my heart, Stephen. This "hollowness" you describe seems to come from years of pouring out our emotions to the wrong people. After a while, there is nothing left within. Excellent poem, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 4:37:00 AM
    i meant, "these".. :)

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 4:36:00 AM
    devastatingly poignant, stephen! delighted by this cyperical imaginings..:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 8:01:00 PM
    hollow inside perhaps, enjoyed your senryu,..p.d.