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Lost in the Darkness

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Lost in the Darkness

As I fell to the ground
My heart fluttered and began to pound
Thinking of my legs being bound

What has happened to me 
Why are my legs not functioning
Where are we 
It is to dark to see 

My boyfriend says he doesn’t know
But he’ll grab me and drag me pull and tow
He promises to me he’ll never let go 

He tells me he knows a way
To make it through until the day
Leaving me in complete dismay 

Wondering what his actions will bring
He finds a cave next to a spring 
My heart felt as if it could sing

We waited there for the sun to rise 
When it came my legs untied
Drifting into each others eyes
The evil darkness we had defied 

by: Virginia Frayer

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  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:19:00 PM

    a lovely read, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:11:00 PM

    Very creative and expressive write, Virginia

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 2:14:00 PM

    This is a decent submission with some good descriptiveness and appropriate rhyming. I enjoyed reading this.