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sometimes im not sure,,,,,,,,,

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sometimes im not sure,,,,,,,,,

sometimes I’m not sure
whats real - or true or fantasy
am I allowing fallacy
to seep  into my brain
do I convince myself that I
believe in things- most others dream
or am I right in seeking home
in what I cannot see
the corner of my eye wont lie 
I see them as they pass like light
but looking straight ahead of me
I’m blinded to the world
if i turn my back to life
then i’d be a fool for doing so
so rather i embrace it close
until i reach my start
Rather here i turn away
not to life, the world, or love
but to all that blocks my path
until it can find me

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  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:08:00 PM
    a block which somewhere down the line clears up just in time, deep write, enjoyeds this one,..p.d.