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Sleeping With The Enemy

SLEEPING WITH THE ENEMY

See what you want to see.
Don't Look at me!
You are staring you are watching;
At what you can't be..

Come sleep by my side.
The whole world is our playground..
Don't make a sound..
Stop clowning around

In the mist of the night,
you keep me from crying

I wipe off the taste of your lips.
You kiss me starting at my inner hips.
Your broke me in a way..
I hate to say your love is good every day 
I deny you, the one thing I can't say.

You are my pillow.. 
Where I rest my legs at night,
Can you feel me~
This moment feels right
I just want to die here, 
Die here ~ 
Die here by your side..

I sleep with my eyes wide open,
I sleep with my enemy by my side
Come here and hold me..
After you watched my world collide..
Come here and love me..
I'm yours till the end of time...
You can rock me!
Under the moon and its rhyme..
I put it all to a side, how I hate you inside.
I can't let go,,
I just want you to know , 
I'm a fool in love with you..
Even if it don't show!

~ SKAT~
12- 7- 10

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:18:00 PM

    What a thought!!! just amazing.... best wishes, sandeep

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Lovely piece Skat... ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 12:13:00 AM

    great poem

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:49:00 PM

    Hey Skitty Skat! How are ya? Excellent poem you have here...love the idea...sleeping with the enemy. Very cool!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:07:00 PM

    Your way of writing is astonishing skat! Never stop until you drop, and continue on until your gone ;)

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:00:00 PM

    WOW! This is really good. I am not just saying it. It is true. This could make a great song. Thanks for sharing it here. God bless. Love always. Lucy

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 8:28:00 AM

    ‡ Captivating, Sensual, Erotic, Beautiful, Intense, Joyful, Mesmerizing, Every Line Every Word Every Thought Every Kiss, Sweet Beautiful *Skat ˜ I Am Glad I Came Upon This Magical Treasure Of Beautiful Love And I Shall Favour Its Majestic Splendours In Pure Made Light ˜ Have 'A Beautiful Day.' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:25:00 PM

    Great write. I like it, but i hope that you are not really sleeping with the enemy. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 2:57:00 PM

    need to see more, of your poems, like this, as many comments below, echo.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:45:00 PM

    I know that feeling ~ Skat ~, the love hate feeling. Great expressions here. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 2:13:00 AM

    i think ur title alone is catchy enough! nice poem skat.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Crafty wordsmith. You have your own fingerprint in poetry. You have a way of captivating any reader! Good piece

  1. Date: 9/5/2011 6:01:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “I Love Everything About This Beautiful Hearts Painting My Dear Precious & Beautiful Irma *^_^* I Could Feel It, I Could Touch It, I Could Taste It & Yesss, Such A Wonderful Flavour *^_^* Super Kudosss!” === My Love Unto Your Tender Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 9:38:00 AM

    Such a thin line separates love from hate, Skat. It sounds like you feel a bit of both for this man. I was drawn to the title as "Sleeping with the Enemy" is one of my favorite movies. But you took a creative and different spin here. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 9:30:00 PM

    It is a very very deep write my dear . Poetry is the best way to get things off your chest . I often do this. You are a marvellous writer .

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 5:20:00 PM

    this was great loved the last few lines.. cory

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 2:53:00 AM

    Great poem. love the way it flows. Love and loss are my favorite to write about also. Thanks for your comments

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 11:47:00 AM

    a great piece of work and thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry.

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:43:00 AM

    wow... this is interesting!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 9:02:00 AM

    an interesting piece of work, and thanks for your read Jancarl

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:00:00 AM

    Very Nice Skat,I Like The Mood !!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 3:35:00 AM

    I simply wonder,what a penning..Enjoyed Dear!

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 8:33:00 PM

    wonderful poem thank you for your comment on my work

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:15:00 AM

    it has a good theme... it's basically good but just doesn't flow for me

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 9:04:00 PM

    Intense piece of poetry, SKAT, depicting well a great divide inside. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comment on my latest. Caroline.

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 10:40:00 AM

    * “A Beautiful Fave In Spectacular Colours * By A Beautiful of Poetry's Verse. * You Have Mail * Beautiful Skitty Skat * The Most Beautiful of Felines * Beautiful Kats * Luv. * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 6:24:00 AM

    Brazen in truth, I can’t help but enjoy this poem for its blatant honesty and in-depth view. Very well written, a favourite I will read again. Best wishes, Love Hel.

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 5:51:00 AM

    Many a scene has captured your words Skat, and many a scene will continue to play. Fine poetry as per usual. Have a lovely weekend....:)

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 8:11:00 PM

    Love me hate me love me, the bitterest of pills, iv'e been there sweet darling, partener sometimes charming, nasty wine to cure my ill's... xox Don

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 9:38:00 PM

    very very nice, love and lust....a great poem...

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