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Change of Seasons - Haiku


icicles 
crying a river of  tears
for winter has died

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:43:00 PM

    Elaine,,a wonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 1:17:00 PM

    Amazing !Enjoyed--kashinath

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 11:00:00 AM

    wowie!!! THis is MY kind of Haiku!!! 7!

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 9:27:00 PM

    BEAUTIFUL ELAINE, LOVE IT~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 7:36:00 PM

    This is just beautiful and a unique way to see the icicles.

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 11:05:00 AM

    Nice one Elaine. With the icicles being the tears, it's like their self mourning....:)

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 10:20:00 AM

    What a great analogy, Lainie. You are so talented. Glad you are back sharing work with us again. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 10:13:00 AM

    Beautiful Haiku...Jimmy

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 9:57:00 AM

    Tell ya one thing - I won't cry when this winter is over. Had over a foot of snow yesterday. Good write - love those icicles dripping. LOve, Dave

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 8:54:00 AM

    enthralled by the flowing imagery of frost with this amazing write, elaine.. thanks for coming around with your cheers; much appreciated! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 6:28:00 AM

    So happy u have returned my friend ..making u a favorite poet of mine today as u have been since the beginning luv...

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 6:27:00 AM

    Absolutely phenomenal Lainie.. more visual I have not read..full of imagery so intense.. great thoughts penned .. thankxx for sharing and for your special comments on my poetry too..luv..

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 5:23:00 PM

    lovely image that brings, bringing the ending of winter, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 3:07:00 PM

    Nice pen picture of the dead winter, Elaine

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 2:41:00 PM

    Very expressive, descriptive, and creative..Enjoyed your ingenuity...Sara