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high school love

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high school love

we offered our hearts
       eagerly sketched in wet sand....
             entwined initials
              
whispered in the wind
        promises too young to keep…
            first kiss at sunset
                            
a chill from the sea…
        such fragile love would vanish 
            in a wave of tears          


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For Linda Marie's "Sentimental Senryu" contest

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:47:00 AM
    absolutely magical, congrats, great writing Déirdre

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:39:00 AM
    WOW, Carrie one we all can relate too.. A great win for you my dear...I loved it...always Michael

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:50:00 PM
    Many Congrats Carrie for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:13:00 PM
    Aww this one is awesome Carrie! Congratulations to you. Didn't you just hit those fragile years on the button!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:50:00 PM
    LOVELY, Carrie. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
    Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest....Jimmy

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
    Carrie, congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:05:00 AM
    Very beautiful Senryu.Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:24:00 AM
    Hello Carrie, Congratulations on your number 1 Win, this is so very passionate and beautiful.... I can remember a love such as this. Lov, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:04:00 AM
    Yes, first love is always tough, but we survive : ) Congratulations on your Fantastic Ist Place win, Carrie. This is beautiful and nostalgic. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:04:00 AM
    A MASTERPIECE!! To my fav's, dear Carrie. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:25:00 AM
    Astonishing and amazing... deserve first place... Congrats! Love, Sami

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:41:00 PM
    those younger years say so much CHEERS for the super win, carrie! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:43:00 PM
    Beautiful and sad. Many congrats for this huge win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:44:00 PM
    Sweet, none the less, hun Carrie! Congratulations on your first place hit. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:49:00 PM
    Carrie, congratulations on winning first place in this contest. With these three finely written senryu poems, you deserved to win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:18:00 PM
    Congrats Carrie on your first place win in my contest .. thankxx for your support luv..

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 2:46:00 PM
    Absolutely outstanding, dear Carrie. Lainie

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