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Chances Lovers Take

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Chances Lovers Take

Love is heart given
Hoping we receive the same
Chances lovers take

When came the moment
That we held each others heart
Love, made no mistake

One life together
Retrospect and circumspect
Is what we made it

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  1. Date: 2/15/2014 5:04:00 PM

    Well you didn't beat about the bush Ray Ya came right out and said what made our day.'

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 6:38:00 AM

    - First place / gold medal goes to: LINDA MARIE! - Thank you, Ray. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 4:43:00 AM

    Lovely tributes paid to Linda Marie and congrats on the win, Ray

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 12:20:00 AM

    Ray, , a wonderful tribute Remembering Linda-Marie: *Our Forever Sweetheart" ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 12:13:00 AM

    thanks for this little poem in dedication to Linda Marie. It fits well with her spirit, Ray.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 10:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Ray. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2011 8:39:00 AM

    Well done Ray. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 10:06:00 PM

    RAY,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Ray. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 8:03:00 AM

    mesages in these great lines, I love this, congrats, Deirdre

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:01:00 AM

    Many Congrats Ray for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:35:00 PM

    Beautiful Senryu, dear Ray. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:31:00 PM

    retrospect and circumspect is what we made it. Those are awesome lines, Ray. Congratulations to you on this extra fine win

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:57:00 PM

    A wonderful message in this one. Congatulations, Ray!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:59:00 AM

    Wonderful Senryu!Congrats Ray on your big win in this contest of Linda.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:37:00 AM

    Hello Ray, So true and such passion and beauty in your words. Congratulations on your win Ray As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:25:00 AM

    Exquisite and beautiful, Ray! Congratulations on your fine 3rd Place win in the contest! Enjoy it! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:51:00 PM

    best wishes for the super win, ray! just awesome.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:01:00 PM

    Ray, Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:30:00 PM

    Three well-written senryu entries. Congratulations on winning with them in Linda's contest.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Ray

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:27:00 PM

    Congrats Ray on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support partner ..always..

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 4:18:00 PM

    ray,my sister has been there for 24 years now and still can't get used to it. hahaha *but lucky lady gets to retire to their NEW home in Arkansas very soon. And I am jealous that I will have to work my butt off for the rest of my life!

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 8:47:00 PM

    excellent final line, it IS what you make of it!! Fine poem, Ray. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 4:37:00 PM

    chances worth taking no matter the outcome, enjoyed your write Ray,..p.d.k

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 6:12:00 AM

    thankxx for supporting my current contest Ray ... good luck... will read as judging time draws closer luv... appreciate ...

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 6:52:00 PM

    Nice multiple haiku with nice images, Ray

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 4:33:00 PM

    I like the revision, Ray, as this is more in line with my own experiences -- and the heartbreaking poems I've read by others who've put everything into a relationship and walked away with nothing. Thanks for letting me know about the revision. Awesome work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 3:20:00 PM

    This is true to some extent, Ray, but both parties in a relationship have to work together to build a future. In some cases, one person does all the work and it's still futile. Very interesting write. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 2:58:00 PM

    That is so true ...It can be what you make it..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Sara

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