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Raven: Death by Dawn

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Raven: Death by Dawn

Reaper Grim, I ask you thee
          to accompany me
As I tread the dawn and beg
          to see my last
Victory against all victories.
          As I reach upon this crucial
End, the deep, dark and decayed
          all welcome me. And
Now the early sun shall surely see
          the grace that Death shall grant to me -

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Contest Entry - Among the Dead sponsored by ~ Constance ~ A Rambling Poet ~~
Written by: Jan Camille Tongco
14th place

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 12:01:00 PM
    I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Jan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 7:34:00 PM
    thanks for all your kind comments. it really means a lot. love lots - camille ^_^

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 7:30:00 PM
    thanks for all your kind words ^_^

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Beautiful write with a challenging form!Congrats on your well deserved win Jan----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 7:26:00 AM
    Many congratulations Jan on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:17:00 AM
    I like the approach you took with Raven begging the Grim Reaper to help her find grace in death, Jan. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:46:00 AM
    Great Acrostic, Jan. many Congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 7:22:00 PM
    Good writing Jan. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this good entry.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:43:00 PM
    Congratulations Jan on your honored plac in contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, jan

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:13:00 PM
    Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 4:31:00 AM
    Hi Camille, how on earth did i manage to put the name Joe in my comment i don't know. any how given me another reason to read this wonderful poem again, time permitting, hopefully will read more of yours. Harry

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 9:32:00 AM
    Wonderful write!Goodluck in the contest!

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 6:08:00 AM
    Thank you for supporting my contest.

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 8:01:00 PM
    Certainly one of the best i have read, Joe. this is excellent. Harry