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First Communion

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First Communion

The powdery snow gloves the fingers of maple forest protecting barren bark with the expectation of rose tipped bloom. A meeting point between pristine innocence and the veiled promise of spring ripening. Each trunk and limb mirroring the action of man Reaching, arching, swaying, creating aisles of church-like splendor, a sacrament where the virginal may walk toward communion with their God. Inward toward the birth of faith and outward toward the wedgwood sky in celestial sight.

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:41:00 AM

    So very well structured, and says so much within it's words. Deep, deep poem that I highly enjoyed - excellent poem.

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 1:20:00 PM

    A very exceptional piece of poetry. I loved it all. Roger Dale Hadden.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:04:00 PM

    It weaves back and forth like a mesmerizing vision Debbie, Your talent shine bright in this beauty. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 7/25/2012 6:26:00 PM

    Congrats on your amazing poem winning the Semi Finals of the Poetry Soup Competition. I wish you good luck in the Finals

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 4:51:00 PM

    You paint a beautiful picture with this one Debbie! Congrats on making it through the first round!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 8:23:00 AM

    ya had me with your first two lines.....the judges agree! congrats on your first round bonzer! schneikies!!! I remember my first communion @ my Catholic Church 3-blocks away in Minneapolis....woulda been 'bout '64 (Beatles played concert @ Met Stadium that summer, now demolished) wish I'd paid more attention....

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 7:03:00 PM

    Beautiful eloquent poem!

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 5:09:00 AM

    A belated congratulations Debbie on your win in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 7:30:00 PM

    Excellent !Goes to my Favs.Congrats on your win Debbie.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 11:43:00 PM

    Great one Debbie. Good choice for this contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 9:41:00 PM

    and congratulations, Dearie!

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 9:40:00 PM

    Yes,this one has got to be one of your very best,Deb. And MOST deserving of this number one spot. In fact,I am going to see if I ever faved this one and if not, I'll come back and finally do it!

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 6:15:00 AM

    Congrats Debbie dear on your first place win in this contest ..another elegant entry .. we are all first placers in this one luv..

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 12:09:00 AM

    sunny congrats on your top win in brian's "off , one" , debs... we are all no.1 here in the contest! :) huggs

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 10:05:00 AM

    Beautiful Debbie, well done:))

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 7:23:00 AM

    Nice work, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 4:31:00 AM

    Super congrats for this lovely write dear friend.

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 3:22:00 AM

    mystical in every sense, debs! i float with you! happy CONGRATS.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:35:00 PM

    This is beautiful and thoughtful Debbie. Free verse at its best. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:29:00 PM

    Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Maverick Free Verse contest luv.. enjoy another exciting win with luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:03:00 PM

    love this well deserved winner Debbie, also i just love a wedgwood sky! Harry

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 6:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fourth place win in the cointest of john, Debbie

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 8:42:00 PM

    I agree with Jimbo....your last 5 lines are a great ending. Yes, this is a 'softer' free verse, but do you know what? It is very universally appealing. Debbie, you gave me a 1st place!? Now, I have to give you a 1st place haha! Hey, thanks for honouring my poem, which is a dedication to my Mom--and all Moms who sacrificed for their children. What can I say? I guess I am a Momma's boy! :D

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 3:22:00 PM

    the chaste demeanor of this stroll through the Maple Forest is quite original....your last 5-lines soar with beauty...to mine faves!.....jmg

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 3:19:00 PM

    agreement with the comments!...Yes!!! "New Yorker" material!!!!what an immense pleasure to read such genius, as only your sharp pen can provide, Deb!!! now I must get back to absorbing every line!!! later...jimbo

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 1:03:00 AM

    So beautifuly written, so soothing to the ear, a wonderful poem! love, Simone

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 5:14:00 AM

    An amazingly beautiful analogy here. Your words collectively deliver some vivid descriptiveness.

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 3:40:00 PM

    Wish you could center the title without the word CENTER coming up in the title?

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