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Lonely Soul

Hesitant will, broken spirit, wandering of a lost soul blind by the path set before...oh
sweet angel of light come forth before, for the soul mists among you; take the wretched
pain that kills within, lift the darkness that shrouds forth and never to begin, rise the
spirit of the lonely soul, fill the hole within always kept owned, therefore it shall
forever be yours

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  1. Date: 2/1/2011 7:35:00 AM

    Thank you!^^..and thank you for letting me know..and yeah i know, i wrote this years ago in this form so i wasnt sure if i was to edit it or keep as it is cuz thats the original and also since it was years ago i actually cant remember if it was to be a poem or some form of literature or perhaps both lol, it was just something i wanted to express ages back

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 6:48:00 AM

    Welcome to SOUP! Your form is FREE VERSE or VERSE...but..you are laying it out on the page like it was a paragraph if you make a line break where you have punctuated it will look more poem like! Light & Love