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DELUSION FLOWERS

Flowers on fields of delusion,
We lay upon them to justify a dream.
Freedom escapes from our smiles,
Flowers denying truth on fields of green.
We offer our apology and our love,
Red roses or lilies white.
A time to smell the Nature's gifts
In fragile petals of the Spring.
Colors may change a season,
Or thorns may betray our lust.
The untouchable wish remains
In a flower we've never held,
Like a secret kept unalterable and pure
Over a time vanishing.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2011 8:16:00 AM

    Congratulations Valeria on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 1:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great write.

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 12:43:00 PM

    Hi Valeria - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 6:11:00 AM

    Congrats Valeria on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and exciting entry luv.. enjoy...

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 11:31:00 PM

    Great writing here. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 8:55:00 PM

    One of the deepest flower poems I read tonight. Congratulations. I enjoyed this. Andrea

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 6:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, valeria

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 6:38:00 PM

    You took a very deep and interesting perspective in your poem, Valeria. I like it! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 6:27:00 PM

    congrats Valeria on your 10th place win in my Flowers contest