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Igloo

Snow over a foot deep
Thrown into a big heap

A pile we will make
If not for the kids sake
For an igloo they will undertake

Through the hole I will creep
Not a word I shall peep
Lying here trying to sleep

As I begin to shake
And my back begins to ache
I think it's time for a house break

I'll crawl out like a sheep
And it's off to the house to get some sleep

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  1. Date: 1/27/2011 8:03:00 AM

    Thank you and fixed

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:30:00 AM

    Simply worded, but very descriptive with some nice rhyming. In the tenth line, "begin" should be "begins". Everything else looks fine.