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  1. Date: 1/30/2011 8:52:00 PM
    oh, this was such a sweet poem, Yasmin. I'm glad you commented to me because I could not find you last week when I looked you up. I was using your name how it is shown at FAcebook. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 2:12:00 PM
    That should get you a very nice Valentines day!! Today your assignment is to write of a NEW DAWN for I can not bare the title of your last verse it's TOO ominous...write of courage, heart, acheiving....your Bet. PS if you want to try an animal limerick I will help you with the meter! OH..LOL..2 new narratives for you to read & comment Black Out & Raven's Plight..Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 1:12:00 AM
    Neatly rhymed! Simple language conveying a sweet and tender message. Well done, Yasmin!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 3:19:00 AM
    this is a good limerick and i like it

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 10:33:00 AM
    Thanks Yasmin for liking my verse "wishing without feel is in vogue". Nice Valentine emotions, Best luck for contest. Luv & Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 8:22:00 AM
    Dream

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 4:31:00 AM
    nothing?

  1. Date: 1/23/2011 4:06:00 PM
    Please check the syllable count in the write. It should be 7 to 10 in lines 1,2 and 5 and in lines 3 and 4- 5 to 7. Yasmin

  1. Date: 1/23/2011 3:30:00 PM
    a very lovely poem.. yasmin... nice for your love,,.take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 8:00:00 PM
    ;) a smooch attack on my Yassie! SMOOOOOOOCHHHHH [guess who?]

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:43:00 PM
    Yasmin I have no idea how but this is entered 4 times in the contest, please try to remove it from the contest , and then re-enter

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:33:00 PM
    A lovely poem, Yasmin. I can tell you put your heart into it and I hope you have truly been blessed with "this beautiful relationship" and that it endures throughout your life. Best wishes, Carolyn